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[Fiction] Peeing in my former apartment


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An awesome tale somedood, an awesome tale. And such a fertile ground for sequels too! Although unfortunately they'll have to clean up if they end up doing it in the new apartment.

I must admit though that from an editing point of view the switch of character mid-story (back & forth) was not very smooth. I wonder if someone knows tricks to switch the point of view of a first-person story with less friction ?

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