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Ha, awesome.  I love it.

I really like this story.  But at the same time it's also a bit hard to read, not because of your English, but because of the punctuation.  More paragraphs and some indentation after quotes would make this a lot better reading experience, please consider: https://litreactor.com/columns/talk-it-out-how-to-punctuate-dialogue-in-your-prose

The most important thing I would say is that each dialogue should start a new paragraph.

I really don't wan't to come across as a dick, in fact, I really like this story, and want to continue reading it, but it could use a few small changes.

Sooooo, when will we get tread about htis pee party?

Awesome chapter BTW.

On 1/31/2017 at 4:33 PM, Scot_Lover said:

we are not bashing how weird other people's things are

Hmmm...

On 1/29/2017 at 2:36 AM, fannywatcher said:

people who eat other peoples poo,sorry but EWWWWW!

Looks like we are, actually.

Contrary to my name, I am not new to this.  I'm a guy from the midwest and despite being 27 I've been pretty consistent with my fetish for 8 or so years, and even a bit before that too.  I love golden showers, but only if both participant are looking to be enjoying it.  I especially love it when girls get their hair soaked with pee.  I don't think I've seen anyone else mention having a thing for that around here?  I come from a background in film and I am a stickler for video quality.  You old people like that SD stuff and I just can't get into it as easily as 720p.  :P

I came here because someone posted one of Wetwulf's stories (the beach house) on reddit.  And now I have a new thing for written erotica?  I didn't even know I could get off to writing, but I guess I can. @wetwulf plz write more!

Anyway!  I've been here for 3 months and I love it!  You all are (mostly) wonderful people.

On 1/29/2017 at 2:36 AM, fannywatcher said:

When you see some fetishes,i reckon peeing is very tame.People who eat other peoples poo,sorry but EWWWWW!Or people who enjoy having needles pushed into their penis,yes,this is a fetish.Peeing is nothing.

Yes, let's all talk about how great our fetishes are, but shit on other peoples, because that's totally what this thread is about.

Welcome!

Yeah, well, people suck.  This is the world we live in, where we can't talk about sex and divulging fetishes is weird.  I agree with you, obviously, but I think it's best you stop caring so much about what others think.  In fact I think that's good advice for life. 

This was great, you got any more like this?

Who's coming in now!?  Is it Lucille?  This is such a weird fanfic, but I like it.

15 hours ago, MrTickle said:

The report says: " ... perform a 'golden showers' (urination) show in front of him ..."

I thought a "golden shower" meant the person had to be urinated *on*. If you are just watching, that's hardly a "shower", is it? 

I say the person writing the report doesn't know his fetish definitions properly!
 

Bunch of plebs!

On 1/12/2017 at 5:50 PM, steve25805 said:

Don't wish him on us for God's sake! Let's agree we'd all be better off if he was President of  Mongolia instead. lol

 

Yeah!  Fuck Mongolia!

That's fucking great Wetwulf.  Does Janice have a daughter too?

Just now, fannywatcher said:

I wish he was our PM in the UK.

You can have him.

Guys, The Donald is one of us.

I have no idea how to feel about this.

This was great.  Thank you.

Now you're never going to get a tip!

Great story.

Kiki is such a great influence on all these young women.

Doesn't matter as long as it's on someone.

Wow!  Cool direction for the story!

6 hours ago, wetwulf said:

Since this series seems to be getting popular with new members, I hope you don't mind if I bump it up.

I don't mind as long as you keep adding to it.

Jennifer Lawrence, Ariel Winters, Evan Rachel Wood.

Those are basically just my celebrity crushes.  But really I'd love to watch anyone I have a crush on pee.

I read this entire thing over this week.  Great story.  Would love to read more.

This was great!  I love how much sex happened in this.

Aw, is this dead?  Would love some more.