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Oh... I agree it is fun to have two characters with really close names (like Selena and Serena here), but it's unfortunately a terrible mistake. It makes it much much harder for the reader to remember which is which. I really, really, advise you to edit your story and change of the character name.

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22 hours ago, daemoniak said:

Oh... I agree it is fun to have two characters with really close names (like Selena and Serena here), but it's unfortunately a terrible mistake. It makes it much much harder for the reader to remember which is which. I really, really, advise you to edit your story and change of the character name.

Thank you for the advice. I changed the name to make it easier to understand.

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