Daniels and Marlons desperate ride home

[1234ichpissehier 12]

Welcome to my first story on this site. Firstly, I have to say, that English is not my main language and that this is my first story, written in english. I hope it is still good, understandable and fun to read.

The following is a short description of the story without too many spoilers
The two young adults called Daniel and Marlon are coming home from a party at a good friend. On the way to the home of Daniel, they both get very desperate. Shortly before they get to Daniel's apartment, they can't hold on anymore. They are in the stairwell of the high-rise building where Daniel lives and need a fast solution for their problem before it is too late.

The Characters
Now I'm going to explain the characters in a short form to give you a tiny view into the decision-making of the two boys and their relation together. But please remember, that this is the way I think they are. Use your own imagination and give them other characteristics. We know, that different persons experiences a single person in different ways.

Daniel
Daniel is a 19-year-old boy. He is kind of a rule breaker. He is not criminal or something like this, he is just a person who doesn't take the world and other things serious. On his friends, he has a big influence, since he is like the leader of the group. In general, he is liked by his friends and not feared.
Marlon
Marlon is also 19 years old. He is more of a reserved or even able to be called as a shy person. He tries to follow every rule, but lets himself influence to things he doesn't want to do in the first place. Furthermore, he accepts these influences and thinks that his friends find good solutions and so he trust them. Daniel is a good friend, maybe his best fried, and he knows and trust him a lot, even if he thinks that Daniel is sometimes too calm about different topics.

 

The Story
It's a Saturday evening. Marlon and Daniel are at a party of their friends. It is a calm group. There is no excessive consume of alcohol. The party was about to end at 9pm. At this time, the buses in their area aren't driving very often anymore. Some lines continue to drive till 8pm, some others till 10pm. Marlon and Daniel are living at different locations. Marlon lives more in the east, Daniel more in the west of their borough. Since the east isn't that frequented, Marlon has no chance to get home at this time. Because of this, he wants to sleep at another person's home, since a walk to his flat would take about 45 minutes in the darkness. So he asked Kevin, another friend of him if he could drive him home, but he wasn't able to, because he has a morning shift in his job on the following Sunday, and he needed to drive immediately home to get enough sleep. Since he doesn't know the other guests that well, that he would not like to sleep at them, he doesn't ask them and goes to his friend Daniel.

Marlon: "Uhm, Daniel, I have a question. How are you driving home?"
Daniel: "I will use the bus, it's not that far for me."
Marlon: "May I sleep at your home? I don't have any posibility to get home, and Kevin can't drive me there."
Daniel: "Sure. That's no problem. But I want to depart now."
Marlon: "Oh, ok, I will hurry!"

Following to this, Marlon straightaway starts to pack his things, so he does not need to stay at the home of the friend who organized the party.
In this rush, Marlon does not go to the bathroom anymore. After the many times the boys went there, he doesn't think that it is clean anymore, and Marlon only pees in the seating position. When Daniel and Marlon left the party, their bus should bring them, after waiting 10 minutes, in 25 minutes home. The bus stop is nearly on the opposite site of the place, where the party was. It is in between some houses and commercial shops. They were already closed, when they left, but there were still some people on the street. Marlon started to feel a tickle in his pants. He needs to pee.

Daniel: "I hope that the bus will arrive soon. It is so cold."
Marlon: "Yes, I need to pee, and I'm freezing as well."
Daniel: "Why didn't you went before we left the party?"
Marlon: "We needed to go, and also the toilet must be dirty."
Daniel: "Oh yes. I went there one hour ago and well, it wasn't clean anymore. And that was some time ago."
Marlon: "You see? It's not a long way. I will just wait."
Daniel: "And if not, we will have a funny picture."

Marlon can only laugh unsettled, since he didn't told him how desperate he really was. The time flies by, and it is 9:35 pm. The bus should have come at half past nine. Because of this, Marlon gets a bit nervous.

Marlon: "Do you know why the bus didn't arrive yet?"
Daniel: No, I don't know why the bus isn't here, but I can check that on my phone."
-20 seconds later-
Daniel: "Well, bad news. The bus at half past nine is cancelled, but the last bus at ten o'clock is punctual."
Marlon: "Oh ok. I hate this freezing wind"

Marlon reacts calm, but he isn't calm at least. This means that he has to wait for another 25 minutes and ride the bus for 25 minutes. These 50 minutes are very long and Marlon is getting nervous about that. But the time flies by. Marlon and Daniel are talking about the old time back in school and about the party. Marlon starts to shiver his legs a bit, but Daniel either doesn't recognize this or he just thinks that it is the cold weather, that makes him shiver. In this time, Daniel also feels his bladder filling up. Then the bus arrives.

Daniel: "Finally. We can be lucky that this one isn't also cancelled. Otherwise, we would be arriving really late."
Marlon: "Yes. I can't wait anymore."
-They both enter the bus and take a seat in the back. There is nobody else on the bus. The warmth makes Marlon squeeze his knees. Now Daniel knows that he is desperate and not freezing-
Daniel: "If you are so desperate, why did you not pee at the bus stop?"
Marlon: "In the middle of the city? You're joking...."
Daniel: "Well, you could also do it here. Either as an accident or as planned, if you know what I mean."
-Marlon exactly knows what he means, and starts to think about the solution presented by Daniel, but he refuses to do so. The cameras and the fear, that the driver might catch him and suspend him forever on bus rides, fears him too much to take the risk. He also wants a bit more privacy in front of his friend.-

The time flies by, and they arrive at their bus stop.

Marlon: "Finally we are there. I can't hold it much longer."
Daniel: "Calm down. I am very desperate, too. I would go to the bush there."
Marlon: "Please don't. I can't hold it much longer, and I don't want to go there."
-Marlon never really told why he doesn't like to pee standing and in public. He just wants to finally arrive in the bathroom and don't want to wait anymore.-
Daniel: "Ok, chill out..."
-Daniel starts walking to the door of the building, where he lives.-

They both enter the apartment complex. The building is a ten level high building with 14 apartments in 2 corridors on every level. The building consist of a stairwell and an elevator to the different levels. On every level, there are the two hallways that are laid around the stairwell in the center. There are also some rooms on the opposite site of the stairwell, where the residents showered and went to toilet, since personal bathrooms in every room were not usual at the time the complex was built. These rooms are nowadays not used anymore and got new functions as storage rooms for the residents or management rooms for cleaners and other employees.
But now let's take a look at the story again.

When the boys went to the elevator to get up to the 8th floor, where Daniel lives, he got something back in his mind, that he completely forgot. The elevator broke down in the morning and there was no way up else than using the stairs to get to the 8th floor.

-Marlon gets panic.-
Marlon: "Why didn't you tell me that before?"
Daniel: "I forgot it. It's broken since this morning, and I thought that they would have fixed it some hours ago."
Marlon: "F*ck. I don't know if I can make it. Let's hurry up."

The boys are going to the stairs and start walking up. On the 5th floor, they both see their unavoidable problem. They won't be able to walk up the next 3 floors without peeing their pants.

Daniel: "Ok, I know a place, where we can relieve ourselves. I can't make it anymore."
Marlon: "Me neither. Just show it. I would do everything for the relief."

Now Daniel went up on the last steps and goes to the rooms I explained above. These are hidden beside a small corner in a corridor, that has only some square meters of place, which makes it impossible to see the boys peeing there, if a resident would be walking there.

Marlon: "Ok, I can't hold it any longer. Let's move there."
-Marlon moves into the small hallway around the corner, that is very dark.-
Marlon: "Please watch, that nobody sees me here."
Daniel: "Just go, I need to pee too."
-Marlon starts to pull out his penis and loweres his pants to his knees. It is the first time that Daniel sees his friend naked after their long years of being friends. Marlon immediately starts to pee. It gushes out in a strong stream into the corner. The floor is immediatly filled with pee and stealing the place to stand in the small corridor. Now Daniel can't hold it back, when he hears the sound of the strong stream.-
Daniel: "I can't wait anymore."
-Daniel goes away from the entrance to the little corridor and straight off pulls out his dick. He also immediately starts peeing. While Daniel starts to pee, the boys hear a sound from a lower level. The boys start to whisper.-
Marlon: "Oh no. Please don't tell me that somebody is coming..."
-Marlon has now a new fear. If a person caught them, they would get into big problems, and he is still far away from being finished.-
Daniel: "Calm down."
Marlon: "How should I calm down. We have no place to stand here anymore."
-The boys are getting quieter since the steps in the stairwell are coming near them. You only hear the splashing sound of their pee. The puddle on the floor got so big, that they are walking back to the entrance of the small corridor, to avoid standing in the puddle. Finally, the streams of the boys end. The sound of steps also ends with a person leaving the stairwell on one level under them.-
Daniel: "Now let's get out of here, I don't want to be caught for this big mess."
Marlon: "Yes, hurry on."
-The boys leave the corridor and start to walk up the last 2 levels and went to the apartment.-

At the apartment of Daniel, both of them are very relieved and happy, that they made it without getting caught. They both start sleeping a little bit later.

 

I hope you liked my first english story!

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[Pissboy97 567]

Great story! Please write more of them