My jury's still kinda out on this 1 all... I wrote a new story to post for my Birthday (no not today, but this week). Since I'd some1 ask me to try another lore or fable, I'd... the concept seems fairly trite. I hope I adapted it well. I'd really like some feedback on this, if you've anything to say good or ill, please do. I'm great with constructive criticism.   In the Swirling Deserts of Ancient Times there was a Kingdom where Mystic things still existed. In this place live