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"Dammit, you're five minutes late from your smoke break. We have patients who need their medication." Dr. Munson said. Jane was tired of the man. He was demanding and always bitching at her. She'd piss in his coffee the next chance she got. An alarm suddenly sounded. Major trauma patients would be coming in. She ran to the emergency room entrance knowing it wouldn't be pretty. Police were already at the desk. She found her friend Judy. "What's going on?" she asked. "It's another drunk. It was a head on collision. We're going to be getting five customers. Here they come." Judy said as ambulances began arriving.

Four men and one woman were wheeled into the hospital. She had been assigned with assisting the last patient. The gurney was wheeled in. It was a woman. Her legs were badly damaged and she had a severe head injury. Jane gasped when she looked more closely at the woman's face. It was Laura. She couldn't believe it. She composed herself and did her job. Laura made it the operating room alive. Laura had been the homecoming queen and someone she had known her whole life.

Five hours later her shift was over and she was outside smoking with Judy. "I've never felt this way about a patient. I don't care if she lives or dies. It's horrible of me." she said. "What happened between you and Laura?" Judy asked. "We grew up on the same block. When we were young Laura always told me how small and ugly I was. Around the age of ten she started doing worse things." Jane replied. "Like what?" Judy asked. "She has two friends who are completely loyal to her. Her friends would hold me down and Laura would punch me in the face and kick me. When they started smoking they's burn their cigarettes into my skin. I still have scars. When I was sixteen Laura broke my leg with a bat. It was horrible hearing my own bones break. Laura said she had always wanted to hear bones snap and thanked me as I tried to crawl home. If I ever told anyone she said she would kill me." Jane replied. "Someone like that probably deserves to die. Goodnight, I'll see you tomorrow." Judy replied. Jane hadn't told Judy the most horrible story. It would haunt her forever. A week after she turned eighteen she was celebrating her birthday and graduation. She rarely went to parties and shouldn't have gone to this one. Laura showed up with her friends and pushed her into a bedroom. Her friends locked the door. Laura beat the shit out of her again. Just when she thought the humilation was at an end, Laura asked her friends to lift up her dress. Jane could hardly move and was helpless. Laura drenched her in piss. She left the party covered in her own blood and Laura's piss. Now she wondered if Laura would live or die.

Mark knew something was bothering his wife. She was just picking at her food. "What's wrong?" he asked. "It's not a big deal. We have someone in critical condition I grew up with. For all I know she's dead by now." Jane responded. "How well did you know her?" Mark asked. Jane decided not to tell Mark the whole story. "Not very well. It's still upsetting." Jane replied.

Doctor Munson handed her a clipboard. Jane had a new patient to take care of. Laura was alive. She looked at the chart. Laura had suffered a traumatic brain injury and had brain damage. She would never be the same. Jane entered the room and stood over Laura's bed. The woman's face was battered and bruised and her head was swollen. "She'll likely be in a wheelchair for the rest of her life. The patient is lucky to be alive. She was the one driving. Her two best friends died." Doctor Munson said from behind her. "I'll take good care of her." Jane replied. For the next week it was touch and go. Laura finally began showing some improvement in the second week. She was still unconscious. Laura's lips were cracked and dried and needed to be moistened. Jane got some water and filled a medicene dropper. She was about to begin dropping water into's Laura's mouth when she had to pee. She forgot she had the dropper in her hand and brought it into the bathroom. She spread her legs and began pissing. She noticed a plastic cup on the sink. She was almost done pissing. She didn't know what she was thinking but quickly grabbed the cup and pissed her last few ounces into it. She emptied the water out of the dropper. She put the dropper in the plastic cup and watched as her piss filled it completely. She went back to the bed and put the dropper over Laura's mouth. She watched as a single drop of piss landed in Laura's dry mouth. "What are you doing? She was horrible to you." Judy said from behind her. Jane jumped. She hadn't heard Judy come in. "She's my patient. She deserves moisture in her mouth just like all the rest." she replied and squeezed two more drops in Laura's open mouth. "You're a better person then I am." Judy replied. "I'll feel better when I can really give her a decent drink." Jane said.

For the next three weeks Jane dripped her piss into Laura's mouth. She came in one day to find Laura had regained consciousness. "We've disconnected the tubes. She's going to be discharged soon. There's nothing else we can do for her. Do what you can. She seems to be obeying basic commands." Doctor Munson said. Laura was awake and applesauce was on the menu. Jane desperately wanted to piss into the applesauce. She couldn't. The cameras were everywhere. It wouldn't look right bringing applesauce into the bathroom. She began feeding her patient. "Open your mouth." she said. Laura opened her mouth. Jane put the applesauce in. Laura wasn't swallowing. "Swallow." she said. Laura swallowed the applesauce. "Lick the spoon." she said. Laura licked the spoon. Jane was frustrated. She desperately wanted to cimb onto the bed, lift her ass, and spray piss all over Laura. As a nurse she had at least got her patient to open her mouth, swallow, and clean the spoon.

"The mother of the patient has arrived. You will escort her to the exit." Dr. Munson said. Jane arrived in the room. Laura's mother was in the corner sitting in a chair. "Oh my God. Jane, I didn't know you were the nurse." she said. "Yes, I'm so sorry Dorothy. I've done everything possible to make her comfortable." Jane replied. Dorothy had been left a fortune. She was a widow and traveled constantly. "I guess it's time to go. I'll bring her to your car." Jane said. An uncomortable silence filled the air as they travelled down the corridor. Dorothy's phone was a welcome interupption. Jane listened to the conversation. "No, I can't come to New York next week. I need to get Laura back to Flagstaff and under proper care. I'll talk to you later." she said. It was a golden opportunity. "Dorothy, if you need to go to New York I can bring Laura to my house. I've already been taking care of her and I know what she needs." Jane said. "I wouldn't want to inconvenience you. I'll take her home." Dorothy replied. "I insist. Go on your trip. She'll be in good hands." Jane responded. "Well it's only a week. I guess it's alright. Be careful. We weren't on good terms. I suspect she murdered her father." Dorothy said. Thirty minutes later the release paperwork was done and Laura was back in her room at the hospital. Jane had three hours left in her shift.

The shift finally ended and Jane had to piss bad. She had been holding it. After a trip to medical supply, she retrieved Laura and brought her home. Mark was on the computer and looked out the window as she pulled into the driveway. He had a look of confusion as she pulled out a wheelchair. Mark came outside as Jane placed Laura in the wheelchair. "What's going on?" he asked. "We are taking care of this woman for a week. Help me get her inside. Lie her down on the floor on her back. I have to pee." Jane said. Mark brought the woman inside and put her on the floor. His wife was quickly taking off her clothes. "What are you doing?" he asked. "Don't say another word. I want to enjoy this. No interupptions." she replied. Jane looked at Laura. She spread her legs wide and squatted. "Open." Laura opened her mouth. Jane pissed into her mouth until it was full and stopped. "Swallow." Laura swallowed the piss. "Open." Laura opened her mouth. Jane filled it again. "Swallow." Laura swallowed again.

Mark didn't know what the fuck was going on. His wife had brought someone home and was pissing over and over into her mouth. He watched each squirt of piss come out of his wife. The woman swallowed each one. He was turned on and began stroking his cock. After five minutes his wife finally ran out of piss. "Lick the spoon." she said. The woman on the ground stuck out her tongue and cleaned the piss off his wife's pussy and ass.

Jane looked at her husband. He was stroking his hard cock. "I want that in my ass." she said. She could see the look in her husbands eyes. He was horny and needed to cum. She spread her legs and he put his cock in her ass. His hot cock felt good. It didn't take long. She felt his cum filling her ass. It felt good. They had been fucking next to Laura. Mark pulled his cock out and Jane spread her ass over Laura. "Open." Laura opened her mouth. Jane pushed the cum out of her ass into Laura's mouth. "Swallow." Laura swallowed. "Open." Cum slowly kept coming out of her ass and into Laura's mouth. "Swallow." Laura swallowed the cum again.

Mark had no idea his wife was so dirty and didn't know what was going on. "I'll be back in a minute. I have to take a leak." he said. "No. Come back. Piss in this." his wife said and handed him a bottle. "What the hell is this?" he asked. "It's a small modified baby bottle. Don't ask questions just piss in it." Jane said. Mark pissed into the bottle. He watched as Jane put the top on. A large nipple stuck out the end. He watched his wife put the bottle inside her pussy. "It's nice and warm. Put her in the wheelchair and bring her to the kitchen table." she said. Mark watched as Jane spread her legs on the edge of the table. The nipple of the bottle was sticking out of her pussy. A drop of his piss glistened on the nipple. "Dinner is served Laura." Jane said. Mark knew what his wife wanted and pushed the woman closer. "Open." Laura opened her mouth. Jane scooted closer and put the nipple in Laura's mouth. "Swallow." Laura began sucking on the nipple. Jane pissed a little more. Laura drank it all down. Mark listened for the next ten minutes as Jane explained who the woman was. Laura continued sucking his piss out of the bottle in his wife's pussy.

"So that's who this is." Jane said after explaining her horrible past. "It looks like the bottle might be empty." Mark replied. Jane took the nipple out of Laura's mouth. Nothing's coming out. I think you're right. She took the bottle out of her pussy. It was empty. "What are we going to do with her for the next week?" Mark asked. "Anything and everything. I'm going to take some time off." Jane replied. Jane took the week off and spread her legs wide. She squirted her piss all over Laura everytime she had to go. She was disappointed. The week was almost up.

"I don't know what you're going to do now. She's leaving today. It's too bad she's getting better at blowjobs." Mark said as he took out his cock. "Make it quick. Her mom will be her soon. We're running out of time. Don't get any cum on her dress." Jane said as she pissed in a baby bottle. She took out a dropper and added a drop of apple juice. "What are you doing? Mark asked. "I don't like lying." Jane responded. Mark was disappointed. He came in Laura's mouth and was just getting ready to piss when the doorbell rang. "Perfect timing. You would have soaked her dress." Jane said.

Dorothy was ready to pick up her daughter. She would immediately put her into a home. The child was evil and had killed her own father. As a child Laura had tormented and killed cats and dogs. Mark answered the door. Jane was on the couch feeding Laura a bottle. Laura was wearing her homecoming dress. "I thought you'd like to see her this way." Jane said. "Thank you Jane. You've done a wonderful job." Dorothy replied. "Would you like to feed her? You need to learn." Jane said. "Sure, I'll give it a try. What is it?" Dorothy asked. "It's an apple juice mix. I made it myself. She really seems to like it." Jane replied. "How do I do it?" Dorothy asked. "Ask her to open." Jane replied. "Open." Dorothy said and put the nipple in her daughters open mouth. "Now tell her to swallow." Jane said. "Swallow." Dorothy said. Laura quickly began drinking Jane's piss. "Is this mayonaisse on her chin?" Dorothy asked. "It must be. We tried a sandwich earlier. It didn't work out so well. Put it on your finger and make her finish it. Laura needs to learn to finish meals." Mark said. Dorothy took the bottle out of Laura's mouth and put her cum covered finger inside. "Swallow." she said. "Good job. You're learning Dorothy." Jane said. Dorothy put the nipple back in Laura's mouth. Laura began sucking Jane's piss out of the bottle again. "She sure is thirsty. The bottle is empty. I guess it's time for us to go." she said.

Jane and Mark began gathering Laura's few belongings. "I was going to put her into a medical facility when I got home. I think I'd rather have her closer. I'd pay you and your husband $150,000.00 a year to take care of my home and Laura. I travel a lot so you'd be in charge of Laura and the house. I'd need you to come with me today Jane." Dorothy said. Jane was stunned. The woman was offering twice of their combined incomes. "Can you give us a moment." Jane asked. It was a no brainer. Mark quickly agreed. He would stay and pack up the house. "Dorothy, we accept your offer. We will continue caring for Laura just like we did for the last week. Give me ten minutes. I need to pack a few things and prepare a bottle for Laura." Jane said. It took fifteen minutes for Jane to pack up what she needed. Dorothy took Laura to the car. Jane went into the kitchen and got a bottle out of the dishwaher. "We're going to have a lot of fun." she said to mark as she spread her legs and pissed into the bottle. She put the nipple on and went to the car to feed Laura.

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I loved both of your stories, and I'm surprised no on has commented on them before now. Good job and keep writing.

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That was something completely different and an interesting mix of pleasure and revenge which was nicely written with good imagery. thanks!

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Thank you holyknight3 and Alfresco. I was looking for some encouragement. I have a new one planned for later this week.

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A great story, actually, and something quite different and highly original. Do write more. :thumbsup:

Reason I was slow to comment was that I didn't wholly know what to make of it at first, what with the brutal details about Laura having broken Jane's legs, and the moral implications of a disabled woman incapable of giving consent being made to drink piss. And yet, Laura had been such an absolute and total bitch that she kind of deserved it.

So initially I didn't know whether to feel awkward or just to enjoy it.

But fuck it, it IS a great story and an awesome work of fiction, so about time I gave recognition for it.

Your original ideas are most welcome here. And once I stopped moralising to myself, I did find it quite a turn on. Again, do write more. :thumbsup:

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Glad you liked it Steve. I did have trouble with the morality issue also. It's why I made her so evil. Just posted a new one......"The Last Straw"

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Glad you liked it Steve. I did have trouble with the morality issue also. It's why I made her so evil. Just posted a new one......"The Last Straw"

Thanks. Only a relatively brief interlude between shifts but will check it out when I finish work later and have the time to relax. :)

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On ‎2‎/‎11‎/‎2016 at 11:09 AM, Zovad said:

Glad you liked it Steve. I did have trouble with the morality issue also. It's why I made her so evil. Just posted a new one......"The Last Straw"

read and appreciated, this one is also great

people should indeed explore their dark side, not to be swallowed by it, obviously but it should be explored indeed

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It's good to know my stories are being enjoyed. Feedback is the best!

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2 hours ago, Zovad said:

It's good to know my stories are being enjoyed. Feedback is the best!

be more self confident, and just write

somebody will notice them

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