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20 hours ago, AbbyPeePrincess said:

Would you guys like me to continue this?

I’d be up for continuing it, however im not for male urination. It’s a turn off for me. Also the guy calling himself a loser and stuff, to me is kinda depressing and also a turn off. 

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I'd love for you to write more of this, I love the tone of the story. If I had one piece of constructive criticism, I'd love if you described the pees a bit more instead of just where they peed and how long. For example;

Instead of saying; Finally, at last the party was ending as I see the Redhead beauty Madeline walking into my room, and she walks over next to my PC and begins peeing on my Pc “oh no my life is over” as I cry.

You could say; At last the party was drawing to a close. The redheaded, beauty, Madeline, entered my room. She looked around, before settling her eyes on my pc. She walked over to it and assumed a standing squat, her panties pulled to the side, and pierced pussy on display.

She closed her eyes in concentration for a moment before a thick stream of piss splattered out all over the floor and my PC. Madeline adjusted her aim to focus directly on my PC. Her piss worked its way into the depths of the computer, I heard sizzling coming from inside and I knew it was ruined forever. She didn't let up, she swiveled her hips from side to side to coat as much of my PC as possible, a sly smile emerging on her face. Piss pooled underneath the PC, slowly running across the floor.

I buried my head in my hands, "My life is over." I cried.

"Damn straight." said Madeline

Her stream had died to a trickle, but with a grunt of effort she was able to send one last spurt into the wreckage. She left without a backwards glance.

I think this gives you time to enjoy the peeing, but it's your story and the decision is up to you. Whatever happens in the next part I will be waiting with baited breathe.

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Ok I will take everything to account what you guys said. This will be hard and grueling to write since I will challenge myself to write the best goddamn 4th part possible so it might take a couple of months I will be updating you guys 

Release date: Feb 1st 2023

I thank you all for reading this and giving me criticism I believe I have gotten better as a writer since my first story 

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On 12/11/2022 at 7:01 AM, AbbyPeePrincess said:

Ok I will take everything to account what you guys said. This will be hard and grueling to write since I will challenge myself to write the best goddamn 4th part possible so it might take a couple of months I will be updating you guys 

Release date: Feb 1st 2023

I thank you all for reading this and giving me criticism I believe I have gotten better as a writer since my first story 

Any updates regarding part 4? That would make me really happy

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Michael’s Room part 4 

This chapter will be a little different from the previous chapters, but still, with the plot in mind, I hope you enjoy 

 

(2 years after the baby shower)

 

A couple of months ago, our country elected a female president, and with that came some radical changes. She made six significant law changes. 

 

1. Females are allowed to pee anywhere they decide is suitable for them, and males are restricted to only urinating in toilets or urinals; if any guy breaks this rule be jailed for up to 3 years.

 

2. If any male harasses or assaults a female while she releases her golden stream, he will be arrested and sentenced to a maximum of 45 years in federal prison 

 

3. Women may be bottomless if they decide since it would be easier to pee. 

 

4. All female toilets will be shut down and converted to male restrooms.

 

5. Bars, restaurants, fast-food diners, nightclubs, and any other place of service must install drains or a button to press so that an employee can bring a bucket so that the female customer may relieve herself.

 

6. Males, if you are standing next to a female, and she decides to pee, and it splashes on you, take it as an honor.

 

I went to sleep praying to god to turn me into a female; as I fell to sleep, I hear a deep voice say, “your wish has been granted” 

 

As I woke in a cold sweat, I noticed my chest feels heavier, and I feel an unfamiliar warm wetness between my legs. I get up and almost pass out when I look at the mirror.

 

I see a Brunette goddess standing in my reflection, "Holy shit, I’m fucking hot,” I hear an ultra-feminine voice say. As a wave of memories hits me as my childhood memories are altered too that if I was born as a girl. 

 

As I admire my body, my tits are gravity-defying perky 36D cups as I have a flat toned stomach and an ass to kill for that jiggles every time I walk and main event my pussy surrounded with my thick toned thighs. 

 

As Naomi walks into my room looks way different from my male counterpart, with no pee stains and no pee smell. Naomi comes and hugs me. "Good morning, big sis,” were both the same height, as both are perky tits, and squeezed each other as she slapped my ass playfully. "Mom says to get ready where having a girl's day.” 

 

As Naomi brings her clothes into my room to change with me as I open my window and stick my ass out to shoot a thick golden stream as it shot down, pattering on the sidewalk. Naomi comes and joins me; she releases a dark golden stream as it lands with force hitting my dad's classic Jeep, staining the freshly coated white paint yellow.

 

As the morning streams end, I grab two tissues, one for me and one for Naomi. “Thank big sis,” as we throw are wipes in the trash can in the room. We get changed and walk down the stairs to the kitchen as my dad is holding a bucket under my mom’s golden stream that’s gushing out of her, some drops landing on his hands and arms.

 

“Good morning, daddy and mom” Naomi and me say in unison as we sit a the kitchen table 

Ok I’ll let you guys decide the ending do you want the good ending or the bad ending?

please enjoy 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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On 2/10/2023 at 12:23 AM, AbbyPeePrincess said:

Michael’s Room part 4 

This chapter will be a little different from the previous chapters, but still, with the plot in mind, I hope you enjoy 

 

(2 years after the baby shower)

 

A couple of months ago, our country elected a female president, and with that came some radical changes. She made six significant law changes. 

 

1. Females are allowed to pee anywhere they decide is suitable for them, and males are restricted to only urinating in toilets or urinals; if any guy breaks this rule be jailed for up to 3 years.

 

2. If any male harasses or assaults a female while she releases her golden stream, he will be arrested and sentenced to a maximum of 45 years in federal prison 

 

3. Women may be bottomless if they decide since it would be easier to pee. 

 

4. All female toilets will be shut down and converted to male restrooms.

 

5. Bars, restaurants, fast-food diners, nightclubs, and any other place of service must install drains or a button to press so that an employee can bring a bucket so that the female customer may relieve herself.

 

6. Males, if you are standing next to a female, and she decides to pee, and it splashes on you, take it as an honor.

 

I went to sleep praying to god to turn me into a female; as I fell to sleep, I hear a deep voice say, “your wish has been granted” 

 

As I woke in a cold sweat, I noticed my chest feels heavier, and I feel an unfamiliar warm wetness between my legs. I get up and almost pass out when I look at the mirror.

 

I see a Brunette goddess standing in my reflection, "Holy shit, I’m fucking hot,” I hear an ultra-feminine voice say. As a wave of memories hits me as my childhood memories are altered too that if I was born as a girl. 

 

As I admire my body, my tits are gravity-defying perky 36D cups as I have a flat toned stomach and an ass to kill for that jiggles every time I walk and main event my pussy surrounded with my thick toned thighs. 

 

As Naomi walks into my room looks way different from my male counterpart, with no pee stains and no pee smell. Naomi comes and hugs me. "Good morning, big sis,” were both the same height, as both are perky tits, and squeezed each other as she slapped my ass playfully. "Mom says to get ready where having a girl's day.” 

 

As Naomi brings her clothes into my room to change with me as I open my window and stick my ass out to shoot a thick golden stream as it shot down, pattering on the sidewalk. Naomi comes and joins me; she releases a dark golden stream as it lands with force hitting my dad's classic Jeep, staining the freshly coated white paint yellow.

 

As the morning streams end, I grab two tissues, one for me and one for Naomi. “Thank big sis,” as we throw are wipes in the trash can in the room. We get changed and walk down the stairs to the kitchen as my dad is holding a bucket under my mom’s golden stream that’s gushing out of her, some drops landing on his hands and arms.

 

“Good morning, daddy and mom” Naomi and me say in unison as we sit a the kitchen table 

Ok I’ll let you guys decide the ending do you want the good ending or the bad ending?

please enjoy 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I would like to hear the both of them

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