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A day of pissing in places I shouldn’t


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Great job for your first time! I'd recommend splitting things up into smaller paragraphs to make it easier to digest. Also maybe add a little bit more description to the peeing and masturbation scenes. Not always needed necessarily, but a sentence or two of detail can go a long way.

As for ideas, most of the prime places for vandalism have been well trodden but I'd love to hear your take on them. House parties, beaches, airports/airplanes, hotel rooms, etc.

If you have any more extreme or interesting ideas, I'd love to see em' but whatever you decide to do next I'm sure you'll do great. Thank you for sharing 😊

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