Carma, Thy Name is Naomi

[Peenicks 853]

This started as a short-form story in the style of @rann's usual brand of troublemaking, then I kinda got carried away. If folks want more of this character, maybe this'll be a thing, who knows?

Disclaimer: Story contains public peeing, piss vandalism, and revenge peeing

Naomi hobbled down the sidewalk of the busy street, hopping from one leg to the next while trying to keep the pressure she had built up at bay. A garish red car zoomed past Naomi at dangerous speed, bellowing up her thin black and white circle skirt and startling her enough that she immediately started shouting expletives in her native tongue at the driver. The gust that lifted her skirt also felt at her bare bottom and trimmed vulva, which combined with the shock it gave the girl caused rivulets of her bladder’s contents to leak out.

She had gone without panties tonight for ease of access in case she scored, but here she was, alone again, shambling across town with all the drinks she had put down in an attempt to drum up small talk with the attractive guys and gals at the club weighing her down. Naomi was a smaller albeit sturdy-looking Hispanic girl, olive skinned, eyes and hair the darkest shade of cocoa brown, a modest amount in the chest having had all of the love go to her thighs and rear, and she wore a black tube top and boots to compliment her thin skirt. She also knew that she hadn’t a snowball’s chance in hell of making it all the way to her apartment before she would have to piss. The local selections of toilets weren’t appealing to her to say the least, but when she turned the corner, she spotted it: a parking garage!

Naomi didn’t have the best relationship with cars, time was she didn’t need one to get around her hometown as a teen. But when she moved to a bigger city, she felt dwarfed by how big and car-dependent it truly was. At this point all she could do was thank God that there was a big place where she could easily hide to relieve herself. It reminded her of when she would take long rides on the train or bus as a teen, she’d always bring a fast-food cup with her. Partly so she’d have something to drink for the ride but mostly so she could sit in a secluded spot and pee into it without having to get off. Dashing over to the corner of the lot, she nestled herself in between two large vehicles, turned, and began to sit against the concrete wall behind her. Spreading her toned and tanned legs apart just enough and lifting the hem of her skirt out of harm’s way, she aimed her trimmed lips squarely at the ground. Naomi quickly checked again for observers before she finally relaxed and desperately released the jet of urine she had been holding back for far too long. The sound of her forceful stream echoed throughout the halls of the garage, but she was too satisfied in her relief to care.

Unfortunately, her relief was short lived as she heard the low rumbling of an engine approaching where Naomi was squatted down busily peeing. Afraid of the all too real possibility of her being seen and getting reported for indecent exposure and public urination, she clenched her lower muscles with all her might to stop her flow of foaming nectar which had begun to snake under the van next to her. Much to her dismay she was forced to shove her skirt back into place as her stream tapered off below her. As the car came into view, she pretended to check her phone as she leaned against the same concrete wall she had her bare bottom pressed against moments ago. Once the car was out of sight, she began scouring the structure for a proper bathroom to use.

She still had droplets of pee visibly leaking from beneath her skirt, thankfully they were so sparse that those who had passed her had hardly noticed (although looking at some of the attractive people she had passed, Naomi was perhaps secretly hoping they would notice). Unbelievable, there wasn’t a single actual bathroom she could use here! As she was about to leave, still desperate yet dejected, she saw something familiar. She hadn’t gotten that good a look at it, but that was unmistakably the car that had torn past her just minutes ago! More than likely, it was the property of some trust fund baby with no regard for others, she had run into her fair share of those types while she was here.

Naomi wasn’t what you would call vitriolic (well, maybe you would, she wouldn’t want you to tho). However, she was certainly no stranger to sticking it to the upper class. This, however, would be one of her more… creative ways of doing so. The car was a blindingly polished red convertible with immaculately upholstered leather seats. The offer was simply too good to pass up; this would serve perfectly as her much-needed toilet for the night. Naomi hoisted her skirt above her butt and sat down atop the driver’s side door of the car. She was vigilantly checking back and forth for passersby, her heart racing at what she plotted to do. She moved her plump ass farther into the car’s interior from her sitting position, the wetness from her crotch now dribbling onto the seat below.

Quickly she began to let loose a few spurts of clear urine onto the leather, the spurts turned to a steady stream. She was pissing into the upholstery with force, and it was giving her the same euphoric relief from before, perhaps even more so. She began to giggle, happy with the message her brazen actions were sending and imagining the face of the prick who would come back and be forced to sit in a sopping puddle of her own pee in order to get home. With this thought in mind, pleasure began to course through her whole body, and she began to touch her vulva, rubbing it lightly and spreading it open while swinging her hips back and forth to cover the backside of the seat and going so far as to splash the steering wheel with her shower.

As her cascading shower started to pool in the now darkened and permanently ruined leather, Naomi’s stream began to peter off into a drizzle and she began hurriedly looking for a means of wiping herself. Her eye was drawn to the air freshener hanging above the mirror. Ripping it from its fixing, she swiped the admittedly rough material across her soft and damp lips before tossing it into the pool of spent urine that now lie inside this once pristine vehicle. Naomi took just enough time to admire her handiwork before another vehicle could be heard entering the lot. With no time to waste and her bladder spent, she tugged her skirt back into place and sauntered away from the scene of her naughty deed.

It was nice to know the night wasn’t a total bust, even if not for the reasons she may have expected. She just found herself a new hobby, and was definitely touching herself to this memory later tonight.

[ILove2piss 26]

10/10 fantastic writing

[miniskirtpisser 335]

I love how hot this is. Using the air freshener to wipe herself is definitely creative.

[Peenicks 853]

30 minutes ago, miniskirtpisser said:

I love how hot this is. Using the air freshener to wipe herself is definitely creative.

Fun Fact: There was actually a line I forgot to include when importing the story from Word. 

"...and sauntered away from the scene of her naughty deed, her crotch now almost certainly smelling of a mixture of arousal and pine trees."

Ah well.

Edited August 31, 2022 by Peenicks

[nopjans 1,142]

This was such a wonderfully written story! Thank you for sharing it.

[rann 670]

I am pleased to be a source of inspiration😂
Needless to say, I enjoyed it very much. I love how much pleasure her actions gave her -- so much so that she found herself a new "hobby"!

[Peenicks 853]

16 hours ago, rann said:

I am pleased to be a source of inspiration😂
Needless to say, I enjoyed it very much. I love how much pleasure her actions gave her -- so much so that she found herself a new "hobby"!

Glad to hear you enjoyed it! Means a lot to me 🙂

[Peenicks 853]

Dear Followers of this thread: Tell me whatcha want! Whatcha really really want?

 

[oliver2 3,899]

1 hour ago, Peenicks said:

Dear Followers of this thread: Tell me whatcha want! Whatcha really really want?

I want you to piss in my ear to remove the earworm you just put there 😉🎶

[expererg 1,170]

Your writing is very good, one of the best I've seen so far for amateur stuff. The details, the style, please keep making nice stories like this !