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Hi Peefreak99 Thanks for reading, liking, and commenting on my story. I really appreciate it dude. It is also good that we both now follow each other here. Look forward to talking to you more.

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Good start and very descriptive.  How about including a little dialogue in the next one though?

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Hi Adyguy6970 thanks for appreciating my story next time I will include dialogue and also will it make it more detailed and interesting for everyone. This was my first story here so I will do more from now on. This was sort of like a trial. Just wanted to see how people will react to it. 

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