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I read this story of yours years ago, and never could find it again, or any other parts of it. Thank you so much for resharing it with us! I have to ask, were there ever any more parts written?

I'll take a shot at this, and this is going to be a hot take, with little editing - She groggily looked over at her clock, which read "6:24", when she felt the pressure in her bladder. Fumbling for her phone, she checked her alarm when she remembered that it was her day off. Smiling to herself, she closed her eyes and released her morning piss into her bedding, and taking care of her other building need. She came quickly, thinking of how much she loved laundry day.

Those short form stories are awesome, but for me, trying to get a concept out in only 3-5 lines is the hardest thing, without resorting to poetry. Excellent work there, and if it helps people get into writing, all the better.

I've not heard the original before.

You definitely should write a sequel. We are all waiting with baited breath. Part 1 was amazing, and 2 was just starting, that I can hardly wait for more. Thank you for the time and effort these things take, we all appreciate it, even if we aren't sociable enough to say it half the time.

I wasn’t usually in the store during the day, but I was in training today for my new position. I was moving from the floor crew to loss prevention. It paid marginally better, was a day position, and I wasn’t going to spend my weekends waxing and buffing the entire store. We were on a break from the class, and the energy drinks I had to keep me up while I was flipping my schedule were running straight through me. Someone was in the family restroom, and the men’s room was closed for cleaning. Disclaimer: This story was inspired by one of YellowKitty's videos, specifically Check it ou

Has anyone here ever played Trials in Tainted Space? And yes, I'm 100% sure that the name (which spells TITS) is intentional. It is a sci fi game that has you boldly cumming where no one has came before and trying to earn money and fame in the process. The idea here seems to be similar, except that he is willing to explore literally every fetish except water sports and scat. The lead writer on that project set the overall story, with contributing writers penning individual scenes, that they integrate into the whole story. He did another setting that was similar, but fantasy, which was a little

Thanks for writing, it was a great story, and I look forward to reading more from you.

Wonderful story. I was afraid you had stopped writing.

I remember reading this story back in the day. Still one of my favorites of your early work.

It is a little early, hopefully, my haste in editing didn't let through too many typos and errors. Thanksgiving weekend 3 Now, I have to warn you, this next part does contain brother/sister, not just cousin incest. Ironically, where I live (the US), all of this is legal, depending on the state. There are some backwards ass states in the south. I remember having a particularly sexy dream, where a gorgeous blonde woman and a handsome dark haired man were taking turns licking my pussy. Apparently in my dream world there had been some argument about who ate pussy better. I’v

That is what I have done so far. I don't expect to have the third part finished till December.

Thanksgiving Weekend 2 Hey, this is Ashley again. I hear you want to know how I spent the rest of my Thanksgiving break. I didn't film any more during the week, not having the time(or the privacy mostly) to edit. Filming itself was impractical for several reasons, and I kinda didn't want to upload a porn clip from my Aunt Carla's house, mostly out of paranoia. I was not, however, a 'good girl'. Not that my family (outside of my cousins, but that is getting ahead of myself) knew otherwise. In front of the family, I did my best to be the model of perfection. This allowed me to have

I have the second part edited, and will try to post it tommorow. Hopefully, there won't be as many stupid grammatical errors.

This is the first part of a story I started last year around thanksgiving, but by the time I had finished it, it was almost Christmas. Let me know if you love it and/or hate it in the comments. So, first off, my name is Ashley, I'm a sophomore in college, and twenty years old. I have strawberry blonde hair, that is a little longer than shoulder length, nice firm C cup breasts, an ass I think is too skinny, but it hasn't ever stopped anyone from staring when I wear the right shorts. I have long runners legs, from years in high school doing cross country. I wasn't quite good enough t

Really loved the story. Sometimes it takes a bit for them to get to the point where you are willing to release them to the wild, and that is ok too.

Wonderful story. I like how you explored the mother's motivation, while still keeping it hot. That is a talent.

You are allowed your opinion. Show don't tell is kinda fundamental to modern storytelling, and in a fantasy setting, you can't automatically assume anything. I see elves by default as D&D elves, but those are generally short (4'9" to 5'5"), and while they have a traditional culture, most elven societies value individual freedom above all else. In the context of this story alone, Lizzy is nearly six feet tall, and comes from a society that values family loyalty above the individual. Most succubi in fiction are shape changers, and the difference between succubi and inccubi is really what fa

I love that. Not going to lie, have a soft (or hard, depending on perspective) spot for classic pinups. Don't see a lot of them with watersports content, though I do remember from about 15 years or so ago, line drawings that were in a similar style, that were linked from Patches Place. Might make that my project to find them this morning. Edit 1: The pictures I was thinking of came from bunkhouse.com and I think they were titled coloring books for adults. This was probably around 1998-2001. The Wayback machine was no help in my search, though I think I might of spotted a few of them in th

I liked it. It's important to show, not just tell, and I think you did a good job of it. I think your biggest dilemma at this point is what you want your focus to be. Do you want to focus on the porn or the adventure? It's possible to do both, I feel trials in tainted space does a decent job of that (https://www.fenoxo.com/ if you haven't played it before) but it does it in sci fi. He goes for seemingly every fetish under the sun, except watersports (honestly, my biggest complaint about it, the second would be consent issues in the game), but other than that it's a fun distraction. I think mos

I liked it, but Lililth's tonal shift was my only real point of contention. I understand where the character is coming from, but I didn't get a walking on eggshells kinda vibe from her at the start of her conversation/apology with Hawk. Are sucubi more in tune with the emotions of others, and Hawk's reaction caused her to break down in tears? It was enjoyable, but I would like some more world building. And on the other hand, you are writing porn, so does that even matter? The porny bits were great, I was hoping Hawk would of gotten Lizzy off before being stopped, but that lacks verisimi

I figured it was something like that from context. I wasn't sure how they differed from ordinary fairy tales. This line from the wikipedia article sums it up. "Pantomime has seldom been performed in the United States, although a few productions have been mounted in recent years. As a consequence, Americans commonly understand the word "pantomime" to refer to the art of mime as it was practiced, for example, by Marcel Marceau and Nola Rae. When it said pantomime, I thought silent mimes.

Loved the story, but why is it tagged pantomime? I think it's a cultural thing I'm not aware of.

Hentaixt, your recent post reminds me of your one thanksgiving stories, which is still one of my all time favorites. I would love to see more from these three.

So, there is a chapter in between this one, and the last one I posted, but I'm afraid it might of been on a hard drive I had to format when I rebuilt my computer last weekend. I think I have that story backed up on a thumb drive somewhere, hopefully, if not. Lily woke the next morning, missing Sara beside her. Her spot in the bed had gone cold, but Lily could hear the shower running in the bathroom. She looked at her phone, 7:30. Wow, did Sara get up early. Lily felt a pressing need in her bladder, and felt very tempted to just empty it into the bed, but decided not to, and