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Great so far. The dialogue was engaging, and it was hard to tell when the true part ended and the fiction took over, so it was a smooth transition. As for the epilogue, yeah you blew it and she probably took your lack of pursuit as disinterest, or just got tired of waiting for you to make a move. But almost every guy has a story like that where he played it too safe with a woman and lost her. Looking forward to part 2.

Here are some ideas of varying risk levels: 1) Boxes in some storage room at work, like a room with old things that employees aren't usually in? Assuming you can be certain no cameras will see you. 2) Wear a skirt and no underwear, so you avoid being seen reaching under to move it aside. Then go to a store, grocery, clothing, appliance for example, and maybe pee on the floor as you walk the isles. 3) Messing a public restroom is always a great option. No cameras and they're usually messy anyway. Use the sink, floor, walls, trashcan, etc 4) Go to some outdoor event, maybe a

Quick note: I have a bunch of these shorts ready so I'll post a new one every Monday.

Luke's Story (Short) I'm too old for dance clubs but my therapist told me to try new things. This wasn't what he had in mind, but since The Oranola had just opened down in the city, I said fine, I'll be the twenty-nine year old man among early twenties kids for the sake of new experiences for one night. Parking was a pain, the lot was full since I went late so I had to park two blocks away. Inside the place was nice, tons of people. I sat at the bar alone and had a soda since I had to drive myself home. It felt like a waste of time so after about forty minutes, it was almost ten o'clock a

When a great voyeur shot is ruined by a brain-dead camera man. There is a series of hidden cam videos where the dumbass operating the camera always pans all the way down to their shoes while they are mid stream and by the time he pans back up, half the action is over. Where the hell did he get the idea that those watching want to see shoes? Or when a woman is clearly spraying a massive strong stream, dumbass zooms in so close that the only thing on screen is the hair follicles on her labia. Another one some guy was literally hiding down inside a cesspool for footage and every time a

I've wondered why they do this as well. Some women have a steady stream all the way to the end and others need pauses. I recently read that many women have damage to their urethra's from std's, which can make urination problematic in many ways, including the need to pause because they have to push hard, or their pee backs up and can't come out steadily. Otherwise, it seems some women prefer to exert themselves to avoid a weak stream that runs down their legs. Also, the hover that many use is actually not anatomically efficient for voiding and makes it physically harder to maintain a steady flo

@Peefreak99 @peeingone @nopjans Thank you all. I wasn't sure if something this short would work.

The forum I referred to wasn't here if that's what you were thinking. It was some other site, the name of which I don't remember. I read a lot of random pee discussions on any sites I can. One was even a site about new mother's and they were talking about how their peeing changed throughout pregnancy and after birth.

Agree 100%. I love when a woman's stream goes wildly off course and sprays uncontrollably. Years ago I saw a hidden cam video of a woman hovering over a public toilet and her stream splashed the seat like crazy and then missed the toilet entirely and she pissed on the floor. Then she turned around while zipping her pants and looked at her mess and just left it, didn't care at all. It took the fetish to a new level for me. So when I hear a woman's pee sounds leaking from a restroom I'm always wondering if she's making a mess. Then when I cleaned restrooms at my old job I enjoyed seeing the mess

Not yet. One day hopefully.

Ethan's Story When I was a kid, my mom's friend Carrie came over often. I had a serious crush on her. She's Italian. At the time, she was late thirties, and really curvy with dark blonde hair. I'll never forget her loud energetic laugh and that sweet perfume she always wore. To this day, I don't know what it was and I've never known anyone else using it but I'd recognize it instantly. Anyway one summer morning I was up early to play Gears of War. Carrie came over like usual to have a coffee with my mom, who had taken the day off work. I remember hearing them down in the kitchen talking an

I don't really fantasize about any colleagues on the toilet. Some of them I've heard when waking by the women's because the doors leak sound into the hall and some of them pee really hard so I admire them more, if anything. As far as pubic hair, there is one woman I work with who's in her 50's and her body is better than many women half her age. She works out and it shows, her physique is incredible. She also has great genes, almost no wrinkles and I find her highly attractive and being that she's from an older era, I do wonder if she has a full bush. With younger women, I don't wonder be

You could bleed the rich dry and it wouldn't make a dent in the national debt or address the governments massive wasting. With the way things are now, taxing the rich and corporations more will cause them to leave to different countries, or simply decrease their domestic investment, which leads to higher unemployment, reduced wages and reduced tax revenue for the government. It may seem like they don't contribute fairly but they invest in the growth and expansion of businesses and leads to economies of scale and massive job creation for society. It's simple, if they tax you more, you spend les

Pretty much the same in the USA. Out of control welfare and shrinking tax base, via record low native birth rates to sustain it. Our insane 22 trillion debt is mostly domestic, so we waste on ourselves, print and borrow, rinse and repeat and the younger generations are left with the bill, crushing college debt, pension obligations, health care costs, broken schools, all caused by the government. But at the end of the day, the government is the reflection of the people. We as the people allow this calamity to continue by voting for these corrupted politicians, while we worry more about the Kard

You have to remember that no one here is a troll or jaded professional writing critic looking to pick your work apart, so you're not going to get the harsh reactions you're afraid of. Those people aren't here. I'd recommend staying off of something like Literotica until your more confident because that crowd WILL destroy your work in no uncertain terms if it's not top quality. The worst you'll get here is simply no reactions at all, or very few. If you ever want to post here, I'd also recommend you start small, not something that you put 20 or 30 hours into. Maybe a one page short at firs

I think a lot of guys with the fetish figured their way to the fountain as a good cover. I started using it in junior high when I was 13, realizing I could hear girls and teachers clearly. I caught my 7th grade English teacher having great pees several times that year. She was an airhead but her peeing was insane. She was a solid built curvy blonde with thick legs and hips, and gorgeous face. I'd hang around at my locker for a minute and she would often come to use the girls room literally just across the hall. I would fidget with books and then slowly use the fountain and through both combine

One of my favorite types of porn other than pee is seeing women on top riding a man in cowgirl. It's always pleasant to see a woman's ass bouncing up and down but what I really like is the power she has over the penis. I like how her vagina dominates it. An object being acted upon by her, and it's almost no longer his, but becomes hers. She uses it, grinds on it, bounces on it, moves it to angles it's not meant for, how hard she wants, and how fast she wants. The act itself is like her saying "This is MY dick now" and it's being controlled by her full body weight. Given how delicate the penis

I haven't been there since last week but my buffering was pretty much broken as well. I usually download from there if possible. Even 2 minute videos take 10 minutes to buffer.

@Dr.P I'm glad this old story got revived. I never saw it until now and man this is great. I literally laughed when you mentioned the drinking fountain trick, I do the same thing at work to this day and did it when I was in school. But the exercise trick you came up with is damn brilliant! Perfect cover by checking pulse since runners always do that. Tipping my hat to you. It's so exciting when you hear a stream start firing away after you've seen a hottie go inside. Whether it's a high pitch hisser or a heavy low pitch torrent punching the water, it just makes the moment such a thrill to

Back in 2005-2006 when yt was new and still coming into it's own, there was legitimate porn there. Explicit stuff. Then it got popular, attracted corporate powerhouses and sponsors and then the censorship began like around 09-10. It's not just pee videos, yt is deleting any and all content that isn't politically correct. Some people's accounts get deleted overnight for speaking against the pc status quo. They use bots and algorithms to search key words for "hate speech" content and either hide it from search index results, demonetize it so the creator loses all ad revenue or outright del

Just found this one a few days ago. Awesome library, I love it so far. https://www.pissrip.net/

Yep, originally this was called Vicious Jivanna but since she is a bit unhinged, and refers to herself in third person and self describes as sweet, I went with that for irony. Might seem long but it's my usual 4 pages in my word processing app. I make sure to not go too far over that.

@spywareonyaLol damn that's the funniest reply ever. You rarely say that little! But thank you.

One of these is a pee sighting and the other is non pee but sexy sight from work, but I'll just post them both here. So for the pee sighting: I randomly decided I wanted some McDonald's at 11 o'clock last night, so since I don't normally go out at that time and it was Saturday, I said what the hell and got in my car. Nice peaceful late night cruise, warm weather, window down enjoying the breeze and ten minutes later I was in the drive through. When I was ordering I could hear a car's sound system booming close by and when I pulled around to the second window to pay, there was

A Glass of Sweet Jivanna She seemed so nice and genuine during the interview. It certainly didn't hurt that she was just so damn sexy. What a stunning blonde beauty of forty-two years, appearing not a day past thirty-two, with looks that any man would melt over, looks that any woman would envy over. From the moment Marcel was escorted to her office and felt her firm handshake and piercing presence, his eyes fell victim to her five foot, eight inch frame. Her cute angelic face had sexy full lips and hypnotic hazel eyes. The tight knee-length, navy blue skirt curved her shape into a