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  1. Thanks again to all who have spoken. I didn't expect this many replies and really do appreciate it. @spywareonya, thank you for sharing such personal details about your unpleasant childhood. And as a side note, I don't expect to change your mind about university regrets but I can tell you from personal experience it's mostly full of morons. Many of my professors were dumb ideologues, and most of the classes were a painful waste of time, useless for my major. Add in mostly immature overgrown children, insane tuition costs that land you in a lifetime of debt, and then the true picture emerg
  2. I've always valued input and wisdom from elders. I have two questions for anyone past their mid-thirties, particularly those who are into their 50's and beyond (such as @steve25805, or @Dr.P for example.) 1. What do you regret doing or not doing in your youth? 2. What do you currently see young people in their 20's doing or not doing that you now know from life experience is a terrible waste of precious time? Thanks in advance to all who weigh in.
  3. This is an older post and I can't recall at this point if she moaned, but I'm sure if I'd heard such, I would've made damn sure to mention it. Audible moans are gold, not easy to hear from public restrooms! That was about the only thing missing that would've made this about as good as it gets.
  4. Something a bit unrelated but I get slightly annoyed at dumb comments on the video. I check them sometimes and for example, there was one on a video of Tam Tam South masturbating and peeing in a hotel room, some guy commented how it was hot til she started peeing. Another was a hot woman peeing a huge stream outside. Scroll down and this guy says "why the fuck would you even film this stupid shit, what kind of retard gets turned on by pee" One vid had the models name on screen for some 20 seconds. Dumbass comments "what's her name, anyone please!" Not worth hating since it does
  5. Haha, love it. Dammit though, I had plans to write a story about a woman having her man help with a urine sample and things getting hot and you took it right out of my head! Lol Awesome as usual. Thanks!
  6. MJ's Story When I was nineteen, I joined a group of mercenaries for hire to take down a diplomat, whose name I won't mention, but who was rising in the ranks and shaping up to become the nation's new dictator and continue a reign of terror on our people. In my country there is not much to do and this job was good money that my family needed. The mercs had taken an abandoned farm to use as their base of operations but it was still vulnerable and needed patrolled since they had enemies. There was this one woman there, Grace, Middle-Eastern looking with a French accent. She was a high
  7. @spywareonya I do like crafting cruel women and getting down into the guts of human feelings. With this one, I was thinking of something about a guy being a reluctant fetishist due to something emotionally traumatic from the one person he never imagined would cause it, still denying how it's affected him. And the mother having just a brief moment of imperfection due to her own unexplained past, that affected her young son in ways she failed to foresee. So this one was intentionally less "hot" because I came at it with a focus on emotions, with peeing on the periphery. I'm not alway
  8. Johnny's Story I remember in my teens fully realizing that my mom is a very attractive woman. No incest urges or anything like that, just acknowledging that she's quite a head-turner. Think of the actress Julianne Moore with blue eyes and a more curvy build and you pretty much know what my mom looks like. She's close to fifty now and still gets plenty of looks from guys of all ages so you can imagine when she was in her prime. I used to wonder if all those guys would still be so attracted to her if they'd heard her loud peeing every day and had the misfortune of walking into the ba
  9. @Dr.P Your experience/age allows you to craft some of the most mature and heartfelt stories I've read. I love this backstory of lost lovers reuniting after many years, changed physically by the realities of aging and evolving their love and admiration of each other in response to it. Only you could write a hot pee romance story that involves hip surgeries and walkers!
  10. @spywareonya Thank you. And yes I've been focused on short stories for many reasons. They are much easier to write, I have 4 more ready to be posted right now. They are also much easier for readers since long stories can get tiresome, especially fetish stories. Another thing is that they allow me to actually touch all the ideas I have. I've got about 30 ideas written down and my typical long writing style would never allow me to cover all of them, since it takes so long to plot, write, and edit those. I will return to long ones on occasion, like with my Urine of the Goddesses stories whi
  11. A lot of school restrooms for staff just have a sign that says staff only but it isn't locked or anything. We had these in my high school, so any student could just go in, even though they are not supposed to. So Andrew just waited for her to be out of sight, no one else saw him and he just walked in. But on second thought, since designated restrooms often are locked, I edited it just now to avoid confusing anyone else, saying that she just never locked it after using it. Thanks for bringing that to my attention.
  12. Andrew's Story In my senior year of high school, I had this hottie, Mrs. Lewis for art class. From day one, while she was taking roll call for the first time, many eyes were glued to her. I loved how her long black hair contrasted with her rather pale skin. It gave her a bold look. At the time she was around thirty years old and let me tell you, this woman had the sexiest damn legs ever. They were incredible, exquisite and she showed them off in short skirts and high heels proudly during the warm months. I also loved when she stood at her canvas to demonstrate, showing her big soli
  13. I vividly remember my first pee porn video. It was around 2003 and I was on a site called wicked whizzers. It was just images back then but one day I got redirected to a site that had a short 40 second or so video of a hidden cam on the floor behind the toilet in someone's house. I couldn't believe it was an actual video and I waited 2 hours for it to buffer on the crippling slow dial up connection back then. A hot brunette woman came in wearing just a long t shirt with nothing on her legs, and there was music in the background. She lifted her shirt and pulled a tiny thong down and bent o
  14. I would never consider myself the most calm or smart person here, but I appreciate your kind words. My post was definitely stern and I expected it might ruffle some feathers but that's part of discourse sometimes. I read the entire thread and felt that the best way I could offer something here is to unpack the disagreements she was getting, and explain them to the best of my ability. Emotions got tense prior to me seeing the conversation and it seemed like the core of the dissent wasn't fully articulated among the arguing. So it may have felt harsh and judgmental to some, but I just felt
  15. Brutus

    Goodbye

    Riley, seeing you still here brightened my evening just now. I was thinking about you. I sent you a pm earlier and hope we can talk more. And I hope you'll stick around and let us all help you see in yourself what we see in you.
  16. Brutus

    Goodbye

    @Riley I hope you are still there reading replies. What you believe about yourself is WRONG. I've had problems with believing myself to be a burden to people as well and I realized that it was my own negative mind. Whatever hell you are going through right now is temporary. It will pass. The people around you that are making you feel this way are not seeing what a gift you are. Listen to everyone here. You are an intelligent and wonderful person and the beauty of who you are shines when you post here. You are the kind of woman that most men want to love, but can't find. You can overcome your i
  17. @Dr.P Great story! I would love to have this happen to me.
  18. Damn, shit got hot in this thread. @Blackinksoul30 Look, I took some time to figure how I want to chime in here, if nothing else to simply wrap this up since it seems everyone has spoken. I've long suspected you don't like me, because I noticed you avoided replying to me in your early days, so I left you alone. I don't expect a reply from you here either, but regardless, I want to explain to you why you angered so many, so maybe you at least understand what happened here. I'm trying to help you here. I'm not angry because I figured this was on the horizon, so know that I speak here w
  19. Ha! I considered that, making it be her punishment for evils in her youth to die in her garden in frustration. But it seemed to be going a bit too deep and I wanted to keep it somewhat simple.
  20. It was too loud for her to have been sitting. Definitely hovering.
  21. Thanks. With your concern about them growing back, trust me it was difficult to justify them being killed completely but I did a ton of research on daffodils for this and they need to spend many months storing energy to grow in spring. Plus human urine needs to be diluted to not harm plants, and in small quantities, so combine two potent floods all at once and the daffodils storage process being ruined by toxic soil, you could justify no growth for that long in rare cases. Originally Ms Russo died trying to replant them so it had a supernatural element that also cursed the soil but I didn
  22. Thanks. I didn't know there were challenges for stories. What section is it under?
  23. I didn't hear the tissue dispenser rattling like in most public toilets but it could've just been quieter than most so I can't say if she wiped or not. The sinks though, I've heard them in that theater in the past and they can be heard from the hall, so no she didn't wash her hands.
  24. (I won't indicate 'short' in parentheses anymore. The purpose of doing so was to communicate that these weren't my typical long-winded stories. I'd guess most who've been reading these know by now that a person's name in the title is one of my shorts.) Rick's Story Ms. Russo has lived next to us my whole life, very sweet lady. Mr. Russo died about twelve years ago and she never remarried. She has a really nice flower garden in her yard, especially the cluster of daffodils that she told me are symbols of memory and that they represent her husband. When I was seventeen, s
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