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Brutus

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  1. @BlindListener You are welcome, thanks for reading. @Alfresco Yes, these are private single person restrooms with locking doors, each with gender designations.
  2. Got some new experiences from work. I feel it's helpful to lay out the situation here for the first 2 paragraphs. I started a new job recently, small quiet office building, about 15 employees, 2 pairs of restrooms for men and women. My office is in a corner at one end of the building, close to a men's room. It rarely gets used and is basically my own as a result of no one being close by. The thing about this place in general is that it's old and in need of renovation, especially the restrooms. Here's where things get interesting in a great way. I've noticed that when I'm in the men's, I c
  3. Hey, Thanks. I didn't even realize I'd been gone a month. Was busy and logging in just got away from me.
  4. Poetry in Motion (A guy meets a group of fellow fetishists for a memorable night of peeing antics.) There I was at the airport, soon to board a plane and that's when my nerves made me question everything. What the hell I was doing, having taken her up on the invitation to meet an exclusive group of fetishists for “pee fun” as she described it. Who was she? Who was Gold Poetry? The naughty tales and poems she posted were always a joy to read but was it even really a woman I'd spent seven months getting close to via private messaging on the forum? Was it a guy pretending,
  5. Excellent capture of intimacy as always, and another reminder of how mutually indulging in a fetish can keep things exciting as we age. We really do seem to have similar minds, as I have been playing with the idea of a story about a series of photos, similar to this!
  6. @miniskirtpisser So I'm in the process of catching up on what others have written and started with yours. What I'm going to say is not because of how much you support my writings, this is 100% real. This is some of the most beautifully heartbreaking fiction I've ever seen on the forum. The painful loneliness of Franklin being abandoned, his joy of seeing Julia return and believing it would be like old times, only for her to do something so coldly cruel to him, shattering his last hopes of happiness. You portrayed his innocence and purity perfectly by how he doesn't even know what her pussy is
  7. Yes, you see exactly what I see, she secretly likes that he saw her. Whether or not that's a fetish she's had for years or she was suddenly surprised at enjoying being seen, I'm not sure yet.
  8. Dammit you and your good ideas! I never considered telling this from her perspective but it has me excited already. As you said, there are so many possible motivations on her part. This one was really fun for me so yes, I'll see what I can come up with to retell this from her point of view. Thanks to you, I actually just made a small change above, saying that she used her phone for light when peeing in his room, and possibly recording the act. This helps make what he saw more believable since it was dark in the room, but mainly I wanted to create an additional possible avenue to explore w
  9. Alan's Story My high school math teacher, Mrs. Davis is the woman who changed my life in one night. I still think about it every day, five years later. Here's how it happened. It was my sophomore year and I was doing bad in algebra, so my dad went to speak to her at the school after hours one night after I got a failing grade on my second exam. After meeting her, I could tell he liked her and I don't blame him. She was a hottie, late thirties, short brown hair, had an average looking face, kinda cute but a great, curvy and toned body since she was a ballroom dancer. And oh boy her
  10. @Peefreak99Completely understand, been there myself, having to leave for my own well-being. You have to take care of yourself and indulging in this stuff can be unhealthy in large volume. As others have said, you would be welcomed back with open arms, but if and until then, take care of yourself.
  11. Peeing down from the roof without a care of who is below and the way the mother flat out told her son she just came. Savagely hot.
  12. Oh no, going inside a women's public restroom is not a risk I'd ever take where I work, or probably any women's room for that matter. I already feel like a pervert for listening so I won't go any further. I'd love to be able to assess the area of many women I've heard but life just isn't that good. As for if she was hovering, I'd say so for certain. Most women do hover in public, at least in the US, and given that Lynn doesn't mind leaving the toilet without flushing, I can't imagine she'd care to sit down.
  13. No not quite that hard but it was in the same league. That girl in the video could've broken a window with her stream so being slightly behind her should put it in perspective. Lynn was no joke at all, very strong and healthy flow.
  14. Nothing unusual, heard another excellent piss today and thought I'd share. The office today was next to empty. Being the day after Christmas, only the low ranked employees as skeleton crew. So myself and three other coworkers went to a local place for lunch and brought the food back to work. We sat in the department board meeting room and enjoyed talking for almost two hours, being that no one was there to tell us to get back to work. One of the girls there who I'll call Lynn is a hot introverted, 23 year-old blonde with a cute angelic face, wears dark eye shadow, about 5 foot 4 a
  15. I can't speak for all men but for me, it's so rare to hear sighs and moans along with a woman peeing that yes it would be more exciting just due to the rarity alone. Remember that for us, hearing women pee is usually going to be from a distance, like outside the women's room and maybe hearing a faint to somewhat clear stream or hiss but we're not close enough to make out something like a subtle sigh or moan like you'd be able to hear sitting in the next stall. You'd have to moan pretty loudly to be heard beyond the restroom, but if I heard a moan that would certainly make it more arousing, unl
  16. @Dr.PThanks, glad you're still enjoying them. I haven't browsed the fiction area in months but if you've done more as of late, I've always enjoyed yours as well and I'll get caught up on them in time, along with other writers I enjoy. With Melissa, yes she does tease William, but not due to trying to gauge his interest. In the first paragraph it's mentioned that she doesn't respect him. That is the foundation of her behavior toward him. William is the classic overly nice guy that is seen as a wuss to women and he doesn't realize it. He pedestalizes her, and she takes advantage of it. Thi
  17. Thanks. Believability is my first priority with these so I actually spend more time thinking of scenario than pee!
  18. This one was a collaboration between myself and @miniskirtpisser. She provided great insight and ideas that I incorporated after asking her via PM. Thank you MSP! Becky's Story I'd been at the hospital comforting Anne and her kids for a few hours. Her mother had just suffered a stroke and it wasn't looking good. She asked me to go to their house and get the iPad from her bedroom so little Nicole could distract herself. She was the youngest at nine years old and wasn't dealing with the news well, so I was happy to help. This simple task proved anything but simple. Isn't
  19. Hi everyone, I have two new stories here, with the second one posted as a reply below. William's Story My coworker Melissa and I have become good friends over the past three years and have a good working relationship. I've always felt there's attraction between us. Aaron from IT jokes that she just flirts with me to stroke her ego and doesn't respect me but he says a lot of dumb things. Anyway, she was promoted to supervisor last month due to department expansion and everyone at work was happy for her. We even threw a little office party that I planned as celebration. O
  20. @miniskirtpisser I appreciate your mentioning of my story as inspiration, that was unexpected and very humbling. Thank you. I think it's worth mentioning also, how endearing you are. Not taking constructive criticism personal, and always conducting yourself with such a joyous attitude, it's very pleasant. It's something I noticed years ago actually.
  21. It's subtle but does drill it in more than needed but that being said it's such a minor thing and probably doesn't get under most readers' skin. Non emphasis can indeed be powerful as you said but it's a very fine art. Overall great story that gets right to the good stuff and wastes no words.
  22. Hey. Nothing much. I just fell out of logging in since my primary reason is usually to post or discuss fiction and I've sort of lost interest. Sometimes I browse the forum without logging in and if I see something that interests me, I resurface for a bit.
  23. @Love2seeherpee I read something years ago that said that women evolved from ancient times to pee very fast as a survival trait. The faster they could eliminate, the less chance a predator had to pounce while they were stuck in position. It seems that they have bigger and more elastic urethra's as well, which allow much more volume to pass at a time. I know for a fact that I've never heard a man pee as hard as women often do. We can regularly take roughly a minute, whereas women can often be done in 8 seconds with a high power gush that's ten times as forceful. As for bladder size, I've
  24. You may be right about her interest in me, at least to a degree. I was actually understating her age though and recently found out that she is 60 years old, literally twice my age. I was shocked as she doesn't look it. She still flirts with me to this day, subtly. But nothing will happen even if she were to become more assertive because she is married and I won't cross that line. But as you said, two people being so similar is rare and precious.
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